Ozymandias - One Shot

The art is good and unique and the graphism is not necessarily bad given that it was done with pencils instead of actual ink + screentones like most mangas.
But still, I prefer the clarity offered by formal mangas made with ink and screentones. The pencils give a feeling of dirtiness which I’m not a fan of. Please use proper inking and lineart.
For screentones, use Clip Studio Paint after you scan your analog manuscripts.